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All in a Night
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 06:26:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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My veins become more prevelent,
As the knife nears my skin.
All I seem to think about,
Is releasing the pain within.
I can feel the blade,
As it cuts deep to the bone.
Screaming and reminding me,
How I'm worthless and alone.
Why stay in a world,
That obviously wants me gone?
Everything I seem to do,
Always goes so wrong.
I get crazy thoughts and visions,
That if you saw would make you cry.
Cravings and yearnings,
To just give up and die.
People look at me and make judgements,
When they see the scars on my arm.
Wondering and whispering,
How I could cause myself such harm.
That's where you're wrong,
It's this world that has me damned.
All I want is that pain to fade,
That's where I want the knife rammed.
My heart whimpers with panic,
As my arms bleed with ache.
You look at me and think,
Look at that poor girl break.
I don't want your sorrow or pity,
Don't give me those stares.
Don't act like you're worried,
Don't fake that you care.
It's all in a night's work,
So before I sleep I scream.
So while I sleep and when I wake,
I'm even sadder in my dreams.
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Pats4eva7
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Re: All in a Night
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 06:48:18 PM AEST
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Very flowing poem and a good write too! I especially liked the last stanza. Hm, all I can say is God be with you. I used to cut. It suxks ass. Hope you feel better!
~*Naomi of Dark*~ |
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Re: All in a Night
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by justme03 on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 07:53:01 PM AEST
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What an awesome poem! i know how you feel.
*hugs*Kortnie
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Re: All in a Night
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by twisted_dreams on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 05:21:48 PM AEST
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| Hey.. You posted a comment on my poem Something Must Be Wrong WIth Me.. and once i read it i finally realized that i do have something to live for.. I was really nice to hear someone say that they go through it too.. Anyway this poem is GREAT..Keep up the good work... Thanks for letting me know im not alone!!!! |
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