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On My Skin
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 06:21:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I have had the cutting edge on my skin
Ive felt the pain
I dropped the blade in silence,
As tears ran down my face.
I couldn’t do it….
Then I thought of my life
And the ones that love me most.
Where does it end?
Draw me a line,
Lead me away from this.
This isn’t me,
Im scared of myself.
Sitting here alone
Crawling….
On this inside
Afraid of whats to come
Ive had the cutting edge on my skin
Ive felt the pain
I dropped the blade in silence,
As tears ran down my face…..
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2005-04-18 18:21:22]
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Re: On My Skin
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 06:52:44 PM AEST
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Very touching poem. Well written. The repetion made it really hit home, and I usually don't care for repetition! I too, have been there. Being afraid of yourself has to be one of the scariest kinds of fear because you can't get away from yourself. You're there all the time, thinking, acting, running. Great job.
~*Naomi of Night*~ |
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Re: On My Skin
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by justme03 on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 07:57:04 PM AEST
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one word: awesome!
your poem summed up exactly how ive been feeling lately..
*hugs* ~kortnie~ |
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