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It's my life to end!!!
Contributed by
Dany
on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 01:57:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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One thing drives me to my purpose,
Knowing your end is near.
How i'm still living I'll never know,
Shut up I can't stand to here.
Feeling sorry for you was a lie to myself,
It brought me down every day.
You decieved me just to think better yourself,
Now listen what I've got to say.
Your lies have ended as you will soon,
No one now stands as the fool.
This day will make you wish you're never born,
There's no one to use for your tool.
Hate has brought me to come back to you,
Love has been terminated.
Regret now forces resent of myself,
And passion was never to be.
Tension built up only to descend back,
And with this no mind could think clear.
The only hate that I had ever felt,
Was hate for myself and for you.
To end this pain there is only one way,
Ending my life and yours now.
Crimson flooding through us now,
Only to soon flow out free.
Copyright ©
Dany
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2005-04-18 13:57:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: It's my life to end!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 03:33:03 PM AEST (User
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Harsh, Dark......good poem , clearly showing the hate... But i found it a bit contradictive.
The tittle say---" it's my life to end" but the third line from the end -- says differently.
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