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Broken
Contributed by
justme03
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Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 01:40:42 PM in AEST
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As a 14 year old, my own poem, written in sleepiness confuses me. lol
So tender a thing
is a broken wing
With angels voices
their broken hearts
sing
So duly we praise
the art of men
to all the condolences
you doth condemn
Here and now
in this life of strife
My wings shall catch
the wind
But I'll only flutter
for a moment
before my broken wings
fall down, shattering my
every dream
~Kortnie~
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justme03
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2005-04-18 13:40:42]
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Re: Broken
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 01:57:34 PM AEST
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| I'm not quite sure what it's about, but it is beautiful and inspiring. The metaphors used, and hidden meanings. I'm amazed that you did this at 12:58pm. Great Write. |
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Re: Broken
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by Yecal on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 10:18:44 PM AEST
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hey thanx, your poems are really good too, i can relate to them. I'm 13, so thats cool how we're around the same age.
Luv ya,
LaceE |
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