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Waiting
Contributed by
Pentecostalpunk777
on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 11:57:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I sit here existing without you,
Like heaven without God,
A body without a soul.
Lifeless and decolite,
But once you are here,
I spring to life,
And suddenly everything is perfect.
No worries, or pain.
But when you are gone again,
I count the seconds until your return.
Seconds that seem like days,
Minutes that like weeks,
Hours that seem like months,
Days that seem like lifetimes.
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Pentecostalpunk777
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2005-04-18 11:57:24]
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Re: Waiting
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by sride686 on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 02:22:40 PM AEST
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this is a very nice write and I'm glad that I read it. Its nice to have a love like this in your life. thank you for sharing your heart with all of us...Steve
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Re: Waiting
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 03:33:22 PM AEST
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This was gripping and I understand totally
about wanting to have what you can't. I loved
the last four lines they really stood out to me.
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