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Contributed by
staryeyed
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Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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where do i go now that im here
down the road with little fear
i wake up today and hope to see
the answer staring down at me
i gaze up at the sunless sky
clear my mind, forget the why
i dont understand how
ive made it this far
let it come to this and now its me
who wants to join and live in my contrived reality...........
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2002-12-23 19:20:00]
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Re: your title here
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by Aidan on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 08:34:50 PM AEST
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broken roads from broken dreams
no clear path ahead of me
still I press hastily on
searching for the coming dawn
that will show me how to find my way
maybe... maybe it will come today.
how's that? |
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Re: your title here
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by staryeyed on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 01:56:23 AM AEST
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that is so beautiful..........wanna chat
give me a message |
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Re: your title here
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by colette on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 03:11:58 PM AEST
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(alone in my reality)
eyes on the sky
feet on the ground
step carefully
without making a sound.
a footprint is left
a heartprint is right
the vision is grey
i wait for the light.
i would change the last line. i suggested the one in parenthesis above.....merry christmas, colette |
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