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Rainbow coloured dreams...
Contributed by
mina-1
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Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 02:46:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Somewhere over the rainbow
Coloured dreams are cast
Through the vibrant arches
Wishes are made to last
Chase the sensous rainbow
A sense of freedom reigns
Eluding your heart
Of all the burdens it feigns
Release all of your emotions
On the rainbow's elegant bends
As deep heartfelt wishes
Are summoned and then to you sent
Seek desired dreams
Amidst the glowing rays
Hope for them deeply
An answered wish shall come your way
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Re: Rainbow coloured dreams...
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 03:28:29 AM AEST
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SUCH LITTLE WORDS THAT PAINT A ART,NOT MUCH IS HEARD BUT ALL IS SEEN SHINING FROM A BIG HEART,LOTS TO READ ON ITS INNER WALLS,TO EXPRESS WHAT ONE FEELS UPON ITS CALL! VERY NICELY WRITTEN SUE!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!! |
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Re: Rainbow coloured dreams...
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 04:04:58 AM AEST
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aw sue that is so uplifting esp for a monday morning. great write
love hx |
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Re: Rainbow coloured dreams...
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by reflections on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 06:22:28 AM AEST
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"Somewhere over the rainbow" what a wonderful thought for creating such a beautiful poem. the rainbow is quite appropriate for lovers, and those seeking love; after all . . . we have become accustomed to expecting our pot of gold to be nestled somewhere at it's end. Kudos!
John
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Re: Rainbow coloured dreams...
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 07:24:16 AM AEST
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What a beautiful, uplifting write... Thanks for sharing this with us...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Rainbow coloured dreams...
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 01:35:43 PM AEST
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A peice of poetry inspired by angels in every
way, simply beautiful . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Rainbow coloured dreams...
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 11:04:27 PM AEST
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| very well done sue. i found the pot of gold in this poem =] i rather like your display with the verses of the rainbow. |
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Re: Rainbow coloured dreams...
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 07:55:54 AM AEST
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rainbows....wishes....heartfelt wishes....freedom....dreams.....glowing rays....wow what a w o n d e r f u l piece of poetry!!!!!...thanks Sue
cheers!~ |
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