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comparable
Contributed by
freda_burrel
on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 12:41:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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deep in thought,
my minds on you.
time and time again,
my thoughts are true.
did you love me?
did you even care?
my thoughts go into action,
do you compare?
time with me ,
to the one thats there.
you took to long,
it shows you dont care.
i cant compare,
my time with you.
especially those things,
we use to do.
the passion was there,
but our time is through.
in dealings of love,
that were once true.
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freda_burrel
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2005-04-18 00:41:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: comparable
(User Rating: 1 ) by sride686 on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 12:26:00 PM AEST (User
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this poem is really good and i'm glad i read it. keep up the good writes and I'll keep reading. I like the way its worded....steve |
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