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When I am Gone
Contributed by
Shadow
on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 06:56:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hold me close this fleeting moment
Savor the day and dawn
For when this time comes to end
I will no longer be a pawn
O savor this passion
Hold the sweet light well
For as the twilight dawns
I grow ashen pale
Savor the pain you caused me
Hold well my speech
For as the darkness dawns
There will be none to leach
Hold me now hand in hand
As with the coming dawn
I will be nothing but a shell
My very life will be gone
Hold me close this fleeting moment
Savor the day and dawn
For as my time here ends
I will no longer be your pawn
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Re: When I am Gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 12:22:04 AM AEST
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| I really like the emotion you have in this poem :) Unfortunately, It's hard to find decent men these days... they're more immature than ever! lol :P I understand your pain though, i believe i've been used before... Jenny |
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Re: When I am Gone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 12:50:01 PM AEST
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| Sounds like your coming into your own.. Learning to stand on your own and take no crap. Good for you. |
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