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setting down the knife
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 01:39:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Never before have I felt so alone
Have I been so abandoned ever before?
Unappreciated and unnoticed
I beg, please, no more
I sat in my blood last night
Just a bit deeper and I would cease to exist
But in all my fear I could not
Too afraid I was able to resist
I used to think that not being able to follow through
With my lack of strength I wasn’t able to die
But someone told me that it was courage
That was keeping me alive
With so much pressure I haven’t been in control
My thoughts are out of pure hate
I need some time to sort myself out
But I might need some help on the way
Trying so hard to resist the call
Addiction is getting the better of me
Someone hold my hand
Show me who I can be
So I plug my ears to block the sound
I cover my eyes to concentrate
I’m going to relive this life
I’m going to set things straight
This time I will not cheat
I’m traveling only by foot
I’m on my way to recovery
Setting the knife down never felt so good
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Re: setting down the knife
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by bonita2689 on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 02:23:41 PM AEST
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| Good for you! Im glad you set down that knife. This poem is great in portraying your need but determination for overcoming you addiction! great job! and thnx for the comment! |
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Re: setting down the knife
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by lost13 on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 03:50:23 PM AEST
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i think it's really great that you're working so hard to stop. this was a great poem.
~*lost*~ |
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Re: setting down the knife
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by Tru2Myself on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 08:00:39 PM AEST
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Great job. Keep the knife down. It is possible... hard but possible. I did it and so can you. I really love the idea of it not being fear but courage keeping you (and me I guess) here. I LOVE THIS. Very nice right. And I am here if you need to talk... I am sure i have said it before but I really am! JUST MESSAGE ME
Lauren |
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Re: setting down the knife
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by spazz911 on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 08:32:41 PM AEST
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jenny
im proud that u r seeing it that way
and u prob should try to sort stuff out and if u do need help i hope u no that I am only a phone call/ car ride/ long run away and i will make it to u if u need me... so keep up the fight |
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