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Broken Hearted
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 02:21:10 AM in AEST
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Words tear at your heart
They are so harsh they rip you apart
You can't help but wonder why
Everyone is always breaking your heart
The simple wishes you once had
Quickly vanish when all goes bad
Only one wish remains
For the heartbreakers to stop playing their games
You are not someone to be used
Can't they tell you're human
They have to much power and with it abuse
If only they would realize that they are wrecking people's lives
Torn apart
Simple dreams shattered
Words that burn you heart
All because of one thing
Being broken hearted
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Re: Broken Hearted
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 02:34:02 AM AEST
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Very well put together Amy...I like the last stanza the best..and after I read the full version..I liked it all that much better..Good job=]
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Re: Broken Hearted
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by emystar on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 02:52:07 AM AEST
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Very good compasonate write.
good work.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Broken Hearted
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 06:10:28 AM AEST
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Amyita, that was such an emotional write.
Whats up sweeite?
I feel really bad on being not there for you to much, but i promise to be there ok.
Cheer up things will get better for you, just keep the faith.
Love ya lots,
Janey |
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Re: Broken Hearted
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 06:15:01 AM AEST
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wow i loved reading this...its all so true being broken hearted
great work very touching |
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Re: Broken Hearted
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by freckle on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:02:55 PM AEST
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Another good write for you Amy. Still sad, but life gets better. Your flow is good and you evoke feelings from the reader.
*hugs*
Carol |
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Re: Broken Hearted
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by KishaLovesCare126 on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:32:58 PM AEST
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hey amy,
L O V E D this poem it was great I'm very proud...
-C- |
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Re: Broken Hearted
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:25:00 AM AEST
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I love this poem! it was so good! but it was
also sad! |
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Re: Broken Hearted
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:03:14 AM AEST
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Girl, this is the story of my (love) life!
so when's your book coming out? |
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