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DETERIORATION
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:27:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Nothing Matters to my mind
Itself included
All important universal matter
Has no significance to it
My mind wants to do away with everything
My mind is searching for a way
To Erase everything that does not matter
Aggravation and Impatience is its fuel
But it is powerless To affect
Anything Outside of itself
Frustrated
It has turned on
The only thing That it can affect
Itself
My own personality
My thoughts
My worries
My cares
My motivations
My mind
All Deteriorating
My mind is slowly eating itself
Desperate for a way
To erase that Which does not matter
But unable to delete anything
But itself
Copyright ©
Onslaught
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2005-04-16 22:27:47]
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Re: DETERIORATION
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:43:00 PM AEST
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| usually styles like this annoy me, but this one did quite well. excellent concept. "a life is not worth living when nothing matters, and this is no life but the death of one..." |
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Re: DETERIORATION
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:48:59 PM AEST
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very intense poem, Good write.
Leia |
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