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the storm and me
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:40:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A storm is coming...
i think it will be bad
this is what I have been waiting for
a storm to hide my disapperance
and let out my pain
because in a storm they cant find you
they have to let go
you can stay there for hours
and no one would know
so I think i'll go out and be late getting home
or maybe...just maybe
I'll go off all alone
of course i could never be alone
with the storm at my side
with its anger of that
that will out win even mine
I can cry there, scream there
and you never could tell
I would let out my anger
on only myself
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spazz911
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2005-04-16 21:40:21]
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Re: the storm and me
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by blue_angel on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:57:44 PM AEST
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total brilliance... i love it. the symbolism of the storm... just amazing. youre quite the poet n you didnt even know it... eh? (canadian moose lol) or should i say... boi? (haha)
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Re: the storm and me
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by Tru2Myself on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:36:28 PM AEST
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Great write! I absolutely loved your use of ryming! Not pushed at all. Amazing!
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Re: the storm and me
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:48:32 PM AEST
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| oh i let my anger out on myself and everyone. ::sigh:: good poem. there is always an end to a storm... |
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