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Just A Moment
Contributed by
JacobsKK
on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:20:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I woke up last night.
Near dawn.
Dawn’s arms had already begun
To stretch across the hills.
I could tell because of the glimpse of light
That was coming through my window.
And I watched it.
For just a moment.
The first thing that came to my mind,
Was your face,
And how much
It reminds me of that sunrise,
That would soon come.
But I swear the thought lasted only
Just a moment.
And although I was half asleep,
I remember smiling for a brief second.
Letting all my thoughts and memories
Of us,
Overcome me.
The light outside was getting brighter by the minute.
And then it dawned on me,
Literally,
How much I love you.
And with that thought,
I drifted off again,
After just a moment of my waking.
Copyright ©
JacobsKK
... [
2005-04-16 21:20:57]
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Re: Just A Moment
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:38:17 PM AEST
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Re: Just A Moment
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 09:40:38 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful, your writting is pristine . .
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