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An Angel
Contributed by
poet_of_anger
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Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 08:18:06 PM in AEST
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I saw an Angel
She sang beautifully
Come sing for me
Please sing for me
I hear your voice calling me
I need your company
I saw an Angel
She captured my soul
Please hear my plea
I want you with me
Everytime I see you
My heart doesn't know what to do
I saw an Angel
She breathed life into me
I am yours
Let me be yours
I will do anything for you
Breathe your life into me
I saw an Angel
I saw an Angel...
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2005-04-16 20:18:06]
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Re: An Angel
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:03:59 PM AEST
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| i think this would have been better without such simple lines to make more complex verses. i saw some that sometimes joining the thought would do better than having the thoughts not related. on another note, this was a very nice dedication. |
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Re: An Angel
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by Tru2Myself on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:48:43 PM AEST
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I like your use of repetition!
Lauren |
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