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Anger
Contributed by
poet_of_anger
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Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 07:52:49 PM in AEST
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What is there to see
What is there to feel
That you have not destroyed
That you have not made bleed
What else can I do
To get through to you
I am not the same
I am not the same
I have gotten over you
I have gotten over me
I have overcome it all
I am not what you're remembering
So leave me be now
You have no right here
I have erased your face
I have erased your place
That once resided in my heart
That section has been ripped apart
And thrown away
Like I was thrown away
Thrown away
There have been days
When my tears came down like rain
That was so long ago
That was so long ago
Almost like a dream
It slowly faded away
Like a nightmare
That only comes on Halloween
You have passed away
Memories have passed away
You are nothing to me now
I don't understand how you can't believe
After all that you had done
That I would come back on my knees
That I would beg and plead
You have faded far away
Far away
What is there to see
What is there to feel
That you have not destroyed
That you have not made bleed
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Re: Anger
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:08:53 PM AEST
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| i think some of the verses in here are unnecessary to the piece and makes it seem like you are rambling a bit. some of your verses also seemed forced in rhyme, but it is a song, so i guess to hear it sung would be different. your first stanza used as your last also, was an excellent touch. that was an excellent stanza worth reading again, and a splendid ending it created. |
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Re: Anger
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by spazz911 on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:19:53 PM AEST
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i think that this would make an amazing song... im sry that girls have to be like this we just r and we often end up screwing over everybody as well as ourself
~kc~ |
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