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Notice Me
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 05:23:26 PM in AEST
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Frightful tears of misery,
Fall dreadfully from my eyes.
As I sit and watch them drop,
My head fills up with whys.
I try and make sense,
Of this mess I call my head.
All the facts lead to one answer,
Just wishing I was dead.
My goodbyes written in blood,
And lamentations in tears.
For now I bet you're wishing,
You could've seen my pain throughout the years.
Well, you're all wrapped up in you petty problems,
To notice my sorrow or pain.
Oblivious to the world around you,
To even notice my rain.
Go ahead and pass me by,
Lets see if I seem to care.
But just know whenever you were down,
I was always there.
So with this pen and paper,
I say to you goodbye.
I know in all your 'sadness',
You'll notice I had to die.
Copyright ©
Pats4eva7
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2005-04-16 17:23:26]
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Re: Notice Me
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by poet_of_anger on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 08:03:55 PM AEST
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| Very emotional, though I do hope you aren't seriously considering such action. Still great write. |
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Re: Notice Me
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:00:37 PM AEST
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desperate and longing this plea for love
u write very efectively . . .
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Re: Notice Me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:22:38 PM AEST
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So sad but u conveinced me that u mean it.
Please just pm me or someone else u trust.
don't do it please?
I know life is hard but there's help out there.
medication helps me.
I shutter to think where I'd be if my Dr. didn't find the right meds to help me.
Think about what u r doing.
You have a global family right here that cares.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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