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Sunset
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 12:57:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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In the evening
when the day
is slowly fading
As the sun gives up
its struggle
for the skies
And it asks for peace
in painted shades
of glory
Then slips silently
from sight
of watchful eyes
I will clear my mind
and relish in
the moment
Knowing well that times
of calm like this
are few
Wishing that the world
would be this way
forever
In the evening
just before the day
is through.
L. Carling c2005
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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2005-04-16 12:57:50]
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Re: Sunset
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 01:05:01 PM AEST
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Larry, if I could just live in that moment forever ... I really like this piece ... the simplicity adds to the beauty of a perfect moment appreciating all that life can be.
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Re: Sunset
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 01:37:30 PM AEST
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Very nice write. I liked the choice of words and the flow was even and steady. Good write.
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Re: Sunset
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by girltranscended on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 02:27:44 PM AEST
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The world does need a bunch more calmness, it is harder and harder to find. Nice write! If only for a moment, I was there.
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Re: Sunset
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:08:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful write as always larry . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Sunset
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by Spike on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 02:57:58 AM AEST
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Thanks, Larry. Finally, after trawling too many pages to pay my 3 for 1 deal, I have found a posting I can read and feel satisfied that I have read a poem. And a picturesque and serene one at that.
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Re: Sunset
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 11:03:33 AM AEST
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I love those moments... I know what this is, it is calming, it is peaceful...it is almost perfect.
You have painted a gorgeous picture here, Larry.
And like you...I wish it was forever.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Sunset
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 02:38:09 PM AEST
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| I need a diversion ... really bad. would you come out and play ? Can I throw rocks .. or write mean poems back and forth ... tease each other ..something .. do you really relish calmness? Oh alright ... but I need a diversion .. and I soo love to tease you because you respond so well ..lol . right now ... baby, it's cold out here... (((((((larry))))))) |
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Re: Sunset
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 02:45:46 PM AEST
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What a feeling of tranquillity this left me with.. I spent the last weekend up in the mountains and this was the feeling I had while up there...
Great imagery...
Jenni |
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Re: Sunset
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 01:57:58 AM AEST
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"Knowing well that times
of calm like this
are few"
Beautiful you have the heart of a poet a gift
that few have and fewer put to use. This
poem is about peace and you portray that
wonderfully with your choice of words. Thank
you for sharing this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Sunset
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 01:02:21 PM AEST
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What a captured moment!
It's essence resides within this lovely piece...thank you!!! |
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Re: Sunset
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:09:07 AM AEST
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What a beautiful moment Larry, how i would love to feel this kind of peace in this world.
Loved it.
Jane~ |
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Re: Sunset
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 02:10:32 PM AEST
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Wow, what a captivating piece...I love this one,
Like a moment captured forever...wonderful work
~Clark |
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