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Want To Get Out
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I am but a wondering soul
seraching the outskirts of reality
knowing death is my only wait out
living in this unbareable place thinking od suicide too many times to count
Im only one person
how much could I help?
I dont really care no more
to me this place is Hell
Someone throw me in a hole
6 feet in the ground
I dont have a soul no more
Why should I be around?
I need to get out of here
and leave my parents behind
they wouldnt notice that Im missing
Im a useless thought within their mind
I wish I had someone nice to go
and leave my past here
Id love to move away from them
I wouldnt shed a tear
if only for what friends I had
the only other thing thatd make me glad
would be the torment to my family
that Id give
the last thing on my mind right now is to live.
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2002-12-23 08:00:00]
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Re: Want To Get Out
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 04:20:07 PM AEST
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Hey, wow this is really good. This is so honest and brutal. In the first line should it have been wandering instead of wondering? Wandering makes more sense to me, but in any case this was awesome I dont really know what else to say...
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Re: Want To Get Out
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 06:13:46 PM AEST
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| yea, sorry about that typo it was suppose to be 'wandering soul' and after that it should have been 'searching' but i have half asleep when i wrote this last night, so i actually did better than i thought i would, thanx for the comment tho. |
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