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On Eagle's Wings
Contributed by
NightOwl
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Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 07:47:52 PM in AEST
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Soaring through the dusky, damp sky after a fierce storm
Screaming my agony to the harsh wind
Crying out to all, engulfing them in my tortured shrieks
Drowning them in my floods of tears
Hunting and preying on those who hurt me
Relishing every last drop of their crimson blood
An endangered, tormented species am I
Dying out from a lack of love.
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NightOwl
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2005-04-15 19:47:52]
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Re: On Eagle's Wings
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 08:51:29 PM AEST
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| well done, i like this especially the last 2 lines |
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Re: On Eagle's Wings
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by Bianca on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:12:14 PM AEST
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| very intense, i liked it. i especially liked 'screaming my agony to the harsh wind' and 'dying out from a lack of love'. 'drowning them in my flood of tears' is a little cliche, though, and it doesn't fit completely with the agonizing, revengeful pain in the rest of the poem. i think you should make more connections to the eagle side of the poem, i really like the idea of a powerful bird/tortured person hunting for food/taking revenge. very nice. |
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Re: On Eagle's Wings
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by Tru2Myself on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 10:29:01 PM AEST
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I love your use of verbs. Very cool.
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Re: On Eagle's Wings
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 01:56:27 AM AEST
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I like the symbolism in this poem , good write!!
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Re: On Eagle's Wings
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 12:58:42 PM AEST
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| I would say "Fierce" best describes this piece. The essence of power and preditor...great emotive work here!! |
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Re: On Eagle's Wings
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by ArmyBrat on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 05:49:28 PM AEST
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| very good, totally awesome you can feel what you are writing. Amazing i wish i could write like you. |
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