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Tears of Blood
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 04:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My wrists are crying
Crying tears of blood
Holding them up, ashamed
For the world to see
For the world to laugh at me
My face is incredulous with awe
At the power
My razor must have
To harm me so
The pain is biting me
And I'm crying,
Crying tears of confusion
Tears of bitterness
I'm slitting my wrists with a frenzied passion
Then running for sympathy
How pathetic i must look
Skinny and wavering
I'm your worst nightmare
I like holding, sharing
The fruits of my denial
Denying I need help
So in the meantime
My arms they'll cry
They'll scream
But I, I won't listen
I'll cut...
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bobotheclown
... [
2002-12-23 04:20:00]
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Re: Tears of Blood
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by OreO on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 05:50:58 PM AEST
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Very deeply written bobo...you pull my past out so many times when you write and it's like im staring it down in the face all over again,
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Re: Tears of Blood
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 01:08:12 AM AEST
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| God! you are making me to cry. |
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Re: Tears of Blood
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by AllAlone on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 02:29:13 PM AEST
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| your words can make me scared of you and want to hug you all at once! that kind of emotion is a very rare talent you are very blessed |
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Re: Tears of Blood
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by ashleigh4 on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 06:52:53 AM AEST
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| these words make me feel empty, i know what you're going through, i've been there, i AM there, and i wouldn't wish it upon anyone... this is so well written i really enjoyed reliving it |
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