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Cursed
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:13:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Cursed with this vessel,
So full of sin.
Uncontrolable feelings,
Twisted thoughts within.
I dont know what im doing,
And I dont know how to keep from crying.
Cant stop the visions in my head,
Cant help that I crave dying.
Why was I cursed with a soul so black,
A heart so cold?
Drifting away to the dark,
To this life I cant keep hold.
Outside im screaming,
And inside im spinning.
Though I know its wrong,
I just keep on sinning.
My arms are full of slashes,
And a soul so torn apart.
With a pointy sword,
The world stabbed my heart.
Uncurse me from this hell,
Please take me away.
I cant stand living,
Of yet another day.
Copyright ©
Pats4eva7
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2005-04-15 17:13:23]
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Re: Cursed
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:26:20 PM AEST
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There is a way out! Trust me!!=D
But about the poem... very well written, flowed pretty well with few stumbles, and the rhymes weren't forced, great write |
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Re: Cursed
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:37:00 PM AEST
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Just.... sheer perfection. Incredibly intense, mind blowing images, simply magnificent work of art, my friend! A somber melody for the ears and heart... I'm sorry you are going through such anguish and sorrow... No one deserves this pain... I understand completely where you are standing now, cheri amie... And know that you have a friend in me, if you ever wish to talk, ok? Thank you for you beautiful comments, and your gorgeous poem... All my love, and comfort and friendship. Forever,
Your friend and fan,
Stephy. |
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Re: Cursed
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:29:30 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Cursed
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by emystar on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:33:18 PM AEST
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U r a great write but these type of writes break my heart.
Hang in there.
huggs,emy |
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Re: Cursed
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 11:51:43 PM AEST
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| That's a good poem. It has a lot of emotion... There are other options. It helps to think about the people who care about you. Surely there is someone who cares about you. They'd be sad if you died. I've tried it before, but I was urged by friends to stop. Think problems through, don't consider suicide a good option... Jenny |
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