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the serpent
Contributed by
fixed
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Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 04:19:31 PM in AEST
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Before
hand things were like Eden.
Peaceful, yet full of life
or so I thought.
My supply was dry
so why try?
Down came the temptation of the Serpent,
drawing you in
thinning your skin.
Lust always wins...
And all promises became like paper in the rain,
dissolving,
dissol
dis..
hisssssssssssss
moving closer..
love like liquid.
pulling you away from our cirlcle,
our square..
being sucked into its suffocating lair...
trapped in its tomb,
locked in her womb.
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Re: the serpent
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by OliWLBS on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 04:34:46 PM AEST
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| Yo fixed wicked poem, i know who you're talking bout and i know wot u mean. xx |
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Re: the serpent
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by dolly_dagger on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:08:09 PM AEST
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wow. this has some complex ideas. it sounds familiar....the hollowness of lust...
think i need a few more reads.
xxxxxx |
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