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Alone On The Surface
Contributed by
PRoachFan
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Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 04:18:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She had my heart
She took it away
Yet my feelings for her still stay
To this very day
Lying alone on the surface
Alone soon to be joined
By a nothingness
A nothingness that will push them away
So it can be alone on the surface
She had my heart
And she rejected it
Yet my feelings for her still remain
They will not perish
For I will try again some day
But until then my feelings remain
Alone on the surface
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PRoachFan
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2005-04-15 16:18:13]
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Re: Alone On The Surface
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by GurlyTye on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 04:47:05 PM AEST
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| this is sad.... but good |
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Re: Alone On The Surface
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by Pats4eva7 on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:22:31 PM AEST
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This peice was so touching and I enjoyed reading it, and I could honestly relate to it. Im sorry you're going through that and I hope everything works out for the best
*melyssa* |
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Re: Alone On The Surface
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 04:36:33 AM AEST
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| Very good write, its hard to loss someone and event harder when the took your hart with them. Keep writing I enjoyed this piece. Thank you…..Steve |
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