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Hunted
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 02:18:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I smell the sweat dripping from your every pore
My feet swollen and sore
From running
I feel the hatred in your cold and evil eyes
My arms covered in blood that slowly dries
From cutting
I see the merciless hunger for blood in the way you stand
My head bruised from the wrath of your hand
From punishment
I hear the rasping of your uneven breath
My body giving in to death
From you...
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2005-04-15 14:18:13]
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Re: Hunted
(User Rating: 1 )
by GurlyTye on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 03:30:07 PM AEST
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| This gave me chills down my spine. but it's deep and a very good write. |
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Re: Hunted
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by sride686 on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 03:37:07 PM AEST
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| this is good writing I had to read it a few times to fully grasp it. Dark and full of emotion very well written....Steve |
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