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Death from Love
Contributed by
sride686
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Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:47:10 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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This is a note full of tears, but yet I do not cry.
It’s a note to tell you I’m going to take my life.
The pain in my life runs to deep.
To make things better I’ll forever sleep.
She took my heart and left me in pain.
She thinks my life is just a game.
So its game over and we both lose.
I’m going to count to 10 and then its through
“ONE” God forgive me as I walk to my death.
“TWO” I guess Hell is where I’ll have to rest.
“THREE” You gave me this life so Your to blame.
“FOUR” God don’t care so its all the same.
“FIVE” I had it all, I had her love.
“SIX” She walked out of my life and left me this gun.
“SEVEN” Its time to shoot and then its done.
“EIGHT” No more need to hide, no need to run.
“NINE” Close my eyes, you got the guts,
Pull the trigger, you can’t ***** this up.
“TEN” Theirs no more hate and no more pain,
With a blast of sin I reach the end.
This is not a cry for help.
So if you find this note don’t come looking.
My life is gone and she’s the one who took it.
Copyright ©
sride686
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2005-04-15 12:47:10]
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Re: Death from Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:57:08 PM AEST
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| it's powerful in its own way. |
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Re: Death from Love
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by GurlyTye on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:05:41 PM AEST
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| This is sad, i feel the need to say that no one is world your life. i know that sometimes it truly feels like there is no other way to escape the pain. but times does heal all. keep writting. |
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Re: Death from Love
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:06:55 PM AEST
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| it has the essence of a suicide note, but in a poetic way, awsome job |
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Re: Death from Love
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:17:24 PM AEST
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11 u took the 1st step in the right direction, u
wrote this essensial peice of writting, 12 u
now have a choice 2 make, give her back the
gun and u take back your life, wish u well . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Death from Love
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 04:09:12 PM AEST
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Thats such a sad write and yet i could so relate to this as so as other will.
You have writen such powerful emotions and im glad you where able to share it.
Jane |
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