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The Color Brown
Contributed by
ramfire
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Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 10:29:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Chocolate, horses, barrels, mud
Hair, coats, paint, shoes, rocks, flags, washtub
Dried old leaves with dead flower bud
Brown is with us
In pasture Jersey chews her cud
Near bull's mean cuss
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2005-04-15 10:29:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Color Brown
(User Rating: 1 ) by Petznick on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:36:04 PM AEST (User
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i thought it was well done, how you took a very simple and general topic and made it out to be something more
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