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I CANNOT LIVE
Contributed by
concrete_rose
on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 08:29:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I look at you and think: I cannot live
Without you; you're the person of my dreams.
Of course I know I can, but I must give
My heart room to tell it as it seems.
Romance must have a language fit for feeling
More than fits between the earth and sky.
For love there cannot be a floor or ceiling:
My love goes down too deep and flies too high.
So when I say I cannot live without you,
Know I can't imagine so much pain;
And when I claim to always dream about you,
Well, know the moon is happy once again.
The sun reveals cold truths for all to see,
But I must light my love with poetry.
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concrete_rose
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2005-04-15 08:29:17]
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Re: I CANNOT LIVE
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by persia on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:29:57 AM AEST
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great poem
lovin the last two lines
persia
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Re: I CANNOT LIVE
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by shelby on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:21:25 PM AEST
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delightful read so forth right
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Re: I CANNOT LIVE
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by whiteleo1984 on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 02:38:46 PM AEST
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| awesome write... keep up the great work |
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