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Suffering heart
Contributed by
Jaycee
on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:21:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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My heart seethes with rage
it cuts to the skin
That life would be cruel
to one I call kin
The angel of blue
for her I do care
and forces of darkness
take me on if you dare
Why do you torture
her suffering heart
Why must you tear
her poor life apart
What has she done
that you treat her so rough
You cannot win
she is amazingly tough
Malevolent forces
whose actions are mean
Keep your hands off
this gal of fifteen
Show ME your fury
and I will not bend
I'll rip you apart
I'll tear and I'll rend
My swords are so sharp
I'll cleave you in half
My weapons are real
so don't even laugh
Our group is a family
this much is true
Leave her alone or
I'll destroy you
Oh, angel of blue
you we do need
don't let them win
this I do plead
Know this you evil
Know I won't rest
And beat you she will
she will pass the test
Copyright ©
Jaycee
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2005-04-15 06:21:34] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Suffering heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by blue_angel on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:41:03 PM AEST (User
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again, you find a way to make me smile. when no one seems to care (with a few exceptions), you write these poems that just... make me feel loved. thank you so much!
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jennie* |
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Re: Suffering heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:14:48 PM AEST (User
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Awww JC..this is so very touching.... I love it.. as I'm sure Jennie does also.... This just goes to show what a caring man you are....
Crazy Jenni |
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