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The incredible one
Contributed by
venkat
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Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 02:59:58 AM in AEST
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I hugged those shining soles of your lotus feet
To my breast as the lightening thrills entered
I danced with pure joy of heart when my eye lid
Babes swooned in the lap of sweet mother sleep
Softly my soul embraced heaven’s blissful space
How much sweetness did I drink beyond the skies!
How much inebriation lost in the waves of bliss!
Oh, my bliss of love on flowerbeds of paradise!
In thy footprints did I tip-toe as swan of light
In thy jingling anklets did I sing sweet delight?
Had I not a blissful vision of thy beautiful face
Seeing splendorous stars on thy sweet red lips
Disrobing darkness in the quarters of midnight,
With wondrous luster of the moon on thy cheeks
Denuding angels in my nectarine waves of bliss,
When you were chewing the shining orb of the sun
With green betel preparation, have I not seen
Your tongue of eternal Consciousness flashing as
A flag of flame from corners of thy blazing mouth
Oozing out the dazzling streams of my life blood
Whence forth millions of moons and myriads of stars
Flowing out, in the streams and torrents of blood
On your tongue I saw birth of clusters of galaxies
And myriads of souls taking shape of this creation
For thou art the mother of world and word divine
And thy tongue is the eternal source of creation
O Mother divine! O Mother of the Eternal Time
Obeisance unto Thee! O Mother Kalika! Om hrim Om!
15-4-2005
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Re: The incredible one
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by emystar on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 03:11:13 AM AEST
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wow I had to read this one three times before I stopped to comment.
An awesome write, my friend. It's great to see you posting something new and as always it's incredibly written.
huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: The incredible one
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 03:35:42 AM AEST
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wow you absolutely blew me away with this. This is an outstanding and sensational poem. The imagery and language used are awesome. a divine write. Absolutely flawless.
Well done. A true talent that shines.
Hugs,
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Re: The incredible one
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 03:43:12 AM AEST
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venkat ... you always make me chew on thought for at least half an hour after I read from you ... only, dang you man ... Now I won't sleep ... "Disrobing darkness in the quarters of midnight" that line will stay with for for days maybe weeks as something I wish I had written. Fabulous as can most certainly be counted on by you ... kind sir>
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: The incredible one
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 11:28:18 AM AEST
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| I can't pick out just one line, because I'd have to be writing the whole poem! My dear friend, your words stretched forth like "a flag of flame from corners of..." your blazing PEN! This has the melodic flow that I have come to respect from your poetry, filled with sensations of enlightenment. This is a great admirable write! Once again! Be well my great friend! Angel always~godspeed~joni |
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Re: The incredible one
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:01:18 PM AEST
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Wow Venkat you never to cease to amaze
me. Your poems are a treat to read. The
whole poem was amazing, but two lines in
particular really stood out to me.
"How much inebriation lost in the waves of bliss!"
and
"Disrobing darkness in the quarters of midnight,"
that was just terrific. I'm not sure if you are a
drinking man, but if you do drink the next
round is on me.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: The incredible one
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:21:47 PM AEST
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As always, your poems are mesmerizing.... You never fail to stimulate thoughts with your poems...
Great job, my friend..
Jenni |
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Re: The incredible one
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 01:12:04 AM AEST
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| wow and wow..... i dearly was moved by this one venkat, your poem, words and feelings behind them are just WoW ....lol, *is a speechless poetess*Oh, my bliss of love on flowerbeds of paradise! >->:- |
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Re: The incredible one
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 01:14:59 AM AEST
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wow and wow..... i dearly was moved by this one venkat, your poem, words and feelings behind them are just WoW ....lol, *is a speechless poetess* ... Oh, my bliss of love on flowerbeds of paradise! that is my favorite line,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The incredible one
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:34:56 PM AEST
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Bless your heart Venkat,
You haven't changed a bit and that is wonderful indeed!
Your terminology always knocks me for a loop, and I enjoy ready you writings very much!
So good to be able to read them again.
Warm Poetic Love,
ConSue |
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Re: The incredible one
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 12:36:03 AM AEST
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wow and wow like i said before you are the master poet here.no doubt about that.your poetry truely amaze me to no end.
I had to read this like 4 times because i like it so much.and i will be back to read it again and again.Your the best venkat. |
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Re: The incredible one
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by inoc on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:59:49 AM AEST
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An awsome write indeed....I respect your poem as I respect you....Each word is standing tall on O Mother Divine!
cheers~coni |
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Re: The incredible one
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:28:21 PM AEST
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| you just have to put everyone elses poems to shame with your masterpieces dont you? =] i loved this one, there is not a single reason not to. very creative and well thought verses. |
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Re: The incredible one
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by Archie on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:29:09 AM AEST
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| You are truly a great writer. But I would have to guess that you have a lot of expirience at it. I saw a lot of things in this poem that inspired me. Most of all was your touch of nature |
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Re: The incredible one
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:58:13 PM AEST
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| i just needed to read this one again. that beginning is always stunning. but your ending is even better... |
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Re: The incredible one
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:11:57 AM AEST
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simpley beautiful
Shari |
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Re: The incredible one
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by Kie on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:29:09 PM AEST
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I find your poetry has such depth, beauty, mystery and it is in a league within itself.
Spectacular Venkat, as always.
Kie |
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Re: The incredible one
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 07:53:17 AM AEST
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Sometimes your poetry just overwhelms me and I'm at a loss for words. There are some great poetic minds at this site and you shine at the top of that list. Great piece, Venkat, as always.
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Re: The incredible one
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:03:55 AM AEST
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Incomparable write! Mesmerizing. The language of a mystic next to whom the "crafts" people of poetry have to pale.
"On your tongue I saw birth of clusters of galaxies
And myriads of souls taking shape of this creation"
Awesome! Too stunnign for the donw-to-earth poet artisan,
but perhaps we must thank our creator for permitting the different echelons of awareness, and perception, to make space for admiration and aspiration.and true obeisance.
Be blessed Kenkat!!
Elizabeth
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Re: The incredible one
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 03:56:38 PM AEST
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A murel of perfection woven into a masterpeice. beautiful work, your a
true craftsmen at your art.
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Re: The incredible one
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by Ess3nc3 on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 12:57:08 PM AEST
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An amazing read. I found myself reading over it multiple times. You, my friend are a poetic prodigy. The heart and skill you put into your poetry is nothing short of quintessential.
"Your tongue of eternal Consciousness flashing as
A flag of flame from corners of thy blazing mouth
Oozing out the dazzling streams of my life blood
Whence forth millions of moons and myriads of stars"
The imagery is flawless and dazzling to the eye. Excellent write, take care my friend. |
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