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Shadow of Dreams
Contributed by
xsitm
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Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:16:04 AM in AEST
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Solar system out of whack
I’m crashing forward, falling back
To a world that I once knew
And in this wreckage I’ve lost my crew
Strange planet, nothing here
Lost my sense, I’ve lost all fear
Lost belief in heart and myself
And like a dying sun all hope melts
This shadow of dreams is nothing new
I’ve seen it before, it’s Déjà vu
Out of nowhere it grows in you
When your own life is nothing new
Behind the trees I hear a sound
But something else is all around
I am not safe I am not sound
I’m forced to run to higher ground
And as I run I don’t look back
Something’s coming and coming fast
It chases me for reasons unknown
And here on this planet I’m all alone
Then suddenly I come to terms
I am my own, that much I’ve learned
I may be alone but I’m all that I got
So I stand my ground, stand tall in this spot
Suddenly the planet shifts
The footsteps stop out on the ridge
The creature that was after me
Was nothing but my own fear you see
Passed out after, I can’t recall
Heard the planet swallowed whole
My guilt and shame in life I’m told
And sent me off, on a trip for home
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xsitm
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Re: Shadow of Dreams
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by Dreama on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:23:06 AM AEST
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nice write, i love poems about dreams!
ur rite, it does have a good message in it, i liked the bit when u stopped and stood ur ground!
keep writing :P
Peace, Pete |
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Re: Shadow of Dreams
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by venkat on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:43:48 AM AEST
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| vivid description of your dream..Good presentation:-) venkat |
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Re: Shadow of Dreams
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by emystar on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 02:56:54 AM AEST
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Wow, glad u captured this in verse as it's amazing.
huggs,
emy |
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