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The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 10:35:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So very in love
It really shows
I see it-- feel it in our steps
It's adorable
The opposite
Attraction in our ev'ry day
All the questioning
Of why we are
Is oddly quaint-- enlightening
Oh how my heart flies
When I know that
There's no reas'ning, no stability
That you're loyal to
My flaws and fears
Our imbalance makes us whole
We're the strangest thing
Near paradox
For we're based on inhibitions
Our stability
Our binding glue
Lies in my insecurities
But it's beautiful
Nonsensical
Whimsy sets our spirits ablaze
I know they don't know
Don't understand
And that's gloriously perfect
It describes us well
Most certainly
That look upon each face we pass
Copyright ©
liquidsunshine
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2005-04-14 22:35:13]
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Re: The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us
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by lost13 on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 10:56:08 PM AEST
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| i think it would be kinda neat if you'd switched the last two, but it was great all the same. my mom and her boyfriend are just like what you're describing so i might have to argue over which of you has more nonsense. it was really great though. loved it. |
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Re: The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 11:01:41 PM AEST
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This is a facinating poem, your
desribing how wonderful love is
in an exact oppisite of what other
people think it's not cause of what
they don't understand i loved the effect,
great peice of writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us
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by lifefliesby on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:57:55 AM AEST
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I love you babe.
I'm glade we fit so oddly together.
Must be a stronger bond then, huh? ;)
I love you babe,
"The man in the suit",
Jared J. |
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Re: The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:15:50 PM AEST
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Valuable indeed. Geez, Anitapoo... I swear, I could wish you nothing greater than to always know the feeling that you must of had when you wrote this....
This honors real love in way that most love poems fail to. It's beautiful, hon.
Having always believed that true beauty is found in that which doesn't fit neatly into collective else's perfect,
~Snemmy~ |
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Re: The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 02:20:16 AM AEST
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a poem that breathes... beautiful!! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 12:52:36 PM AEST
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Well done! Beautiful.... I know what you mean. Love should be wierd...
Take care.
David |
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