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All That's Left
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:14:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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when i'm gone
all that's left of me
is a slew of pigmy sized cuts
a river of blood
but i'm afraid of dying
i don't want to go
but i'm ready to leave...
what to do
a life of pain and misery..
or a death of unknowns.....who knows
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2005-04-14 21:14:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: All That's Left
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tru2Myself on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:45:28 PM AEST (User
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A Slew of pigmy sized cuts... nice... origional... if you said it but that would be one of the best lines in the best song by The Used. I usual comment nicely but I HATE when people use whole lines form someone elses work. The rest of it is good but it bugged me that you used one of their lines. wait... two.... i'm not afraid to die... hmmm...
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