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Given Up
Contributed by
Angelic_Demon
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Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:57:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Why? Why did I try loving you?
You never wanted me to,
and yet I still tried.
Now I think I finally give up.
It's sad to think I finally am.
So many things I've tried,
and in so many ways I failed.
I can't love you, and can't be your friend.
Yet... I don't think we ever had much of anything.
Sweetheart, you don't know how to treat women.
Even your "friends."
You proved that a few days ago.
Telling me to lose weight?
You really are an arse!
Maybe everyone was right...
I should have stopped talking to you a long time ago.
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Angelic_Demon
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2005-04-14 19:57:11]
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Re: Given Up
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 08:01:16 PM AEST
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Or lack of love life, as it is :p (sorry, couldnt resist) Anyway, I think this is one of my favourites of yours... a topic I cant stand to read... but still, its written perfectly darling, it flows wonderfully and, except the last two lines, I love it :p
Mayhap you should turn your attentions away from men, they're not worth the hastle half the time lol. Like I've always said... you can do better than *HIM* anyway. *mutters* Very nicely done m'dear, write more often!
Love always
Your sis
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Re: Given Up
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by pixie on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 08:24:37 PM AEST
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very good write, sounds like this guy was a real arse lol written well hunni, well done.deep and meaningful, you deserve soo much better and I hope you find true love :)
pix xx |
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Re: Given Up
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:31:30 PM AEST
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wonderful write girl. he was never worth you anyway...forget him, you'll find someone that knows how to treat and respect women and he'll be a thousand, thousand times more beautiful.
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Re: Given Up
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:28:56 PM AEST
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this is heartfelt and honest, mara, but he is a poopyhead to not see how beautiful you truely are:)
hugs n' love momxx
@->>->:-
p.s. snicker and snort at your note lol |
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