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Helpless
Contributed by
therac00n
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Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:04:30 PM in AEST
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Sometimes at night,
It just feels right,
To just start to need,
To just start to PLEAD,
To just start to feed,
The hunger inside.
The hunger of course,
Just starts to get worse,
But there is no stopping,
The veins from popping,
And life itself just goes down the sink.
When you try to tell others,
You just start to freeze,
You fall to your knees,
As your mind starts to squeeze,
And rip you apart.
The chill in your bones,
Just says you're alone,
If only someone had known,
About how you feel.
But the time has come,
As you start to feel numb,
And you start to feel dumb,
For it is almost done,
As you finish loading the gun,
And you bring it to your head.
It is over now,
Don't you feel proud?
Now rapped in a shroud,
You finished your vow,
Of peace to nobody that cares.
Copyright ©
therac00n
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2005-04-14 19:04:30]
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Re: Helpless
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:24:18 PM AEST
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| That's a great poem! I can feel the words in this poem. I've felt all alone, like no one cares about me before. I've thought about suicide, i don't know many ppl who haven't thought about it. Don't give up hope, there must be someone who cares about you. Jenny |
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Re: Helpless
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by Jzarmel on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2010 @ 06:40:00 AM AEST
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| I say this is a good piece of work. |
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