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Cut too deep
Contributed by
SelfDistruction
on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 05:41:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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With the knife in my hand
I cut my wrist
I watch the blood
as it goes down my hand
and like magic,
all my problems disappear
All i can think about is my wrist
All the pain, all the blood
The pain is so intriguing to me
I love it,
I want more pain
I need more pain
I cut again
This time much deeper
I think i cut a little too deep
I feel myself fading away
It feels so unreal
I'm getting weaker
I'm dying away
I can hardly breathe
All i can see is blood
All i can hear is myself screaming
I've faded away now
All i see is blackness
I don't hear anything
I feel calm now...
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SelfDistruction
... [
2005-04-14 17:41:55]
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Re: Cut too deep
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 06:00:09 PM AEST
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| Great! great great great! this poem perfectly captures he feelings of cutting. try not to cut too deep, tho... |
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Re: Cut too deep
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by twisted_dreams on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:09:20 PM AEST
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| WOW.. that is really wonderful.. i used to cut myslef too. so i know how u feel.. Keep up the good work!!! |
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Re: Cut too deep
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by lost13 on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 04:05:45 PM AEST
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| this was such a good poem, it really expresses how you feel. just don't cut too deep, ok. |
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