|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Summer Nights
Contributed by
taurusgem1
on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 10:42:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Heavy Moisture
Clings to me, as I walk
Down the shaded path
The cool warmth of the ground
Cushion each bare step
Trees restless, whisper
A sacred song of summer
To the wind as their braches dance
The sun earlier full and hot
Lazily sets, with a cigarette
And a cheap bottle of wine
The mood laid back
Hints of life pouring out
Houses with shaded porches
It is the little old lady
Tidily knitting in her creaking chair
Humming
Oh how I love these summer nights
Copyright ©
taurusgem1
... [
2005-04-14 10:42:05]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Summer Nights
(User Rating: 1 )
by alexb on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 10:48:15 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| what a perfect description. reminds me how much i love summer. great write |
|
|
Re: Summer Nights
(User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 04:43:33 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| vry descriptive and very lovely. i enjoyed it very much, you dd an excellent job in portraying your summer nights. |
|
|
Re: Summer Nights
(User Rating: 1 )
by doug on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 04:57:15 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| the best I've read in a while. I wish I could be in this place you've described. Thankfully I was able to be there at least for a little while in my imagination thanks to you. great writing , take care , doug |
|
|
Re: Summer Nights
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 11:29:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
The mood of summer is etched in these words... great write!
I loved the line-
'Hints of life pour in' |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
