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What Am I To Do?
Contributed by
persia
on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:41:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The atmosphere
filled
with the smoke
you knew
I knew
you abused
but still
you
found my stare
And
still as night
you abuse
you couldnt
really have
a heart
and hurt
me
like you
hurt me and
be like
those that
presume to know
those
things about me
What am I to do?
anyone who had
a heart
could only see
You knew
I knew...
but still...
What am I to do?
Copyright ©
persia
... [
2005-04-14 09:41:45]
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Re: What Am I To Do?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 09:07:01 AM AEST
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This is great work Persia, so much good poetry goes unnoticed on this site work that deserve more reads and comments. This one is up there! excellent.
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Re: What Am I To Do?
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by Ruby1987 on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:13:52 PM AEST
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if u knew dat he knew den ur js stupid!
but... gd poem though i like da uv written it! |
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Re: What Am I To Do?
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 07:18:58 PM AEST
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it is so heart at times to understand why another breaks our heart, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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