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Jumpin' the Bridge
Contributed by
Jaycee
on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:53:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Jumpin' the bridge
o'er I-95
no more pain
no longer alive
Is this the best way?
I ponder with frown
If I blow this
they'll call me a clown
Crack open transformer
Five or six hundred volts
Stopped be my heart
by rigorous jolts
Life is a downer
with little white pills
They let in the pain
while suppressin' the thrills
No, headin' for bridge
needle pegged eighty five
makin' hard right
then into the dive
This was much better
than using the gun
This was the plan
The plan for no one
Then came 'cross a poem
Sweet words that rang true
Words that spoke volumes
from the angel of blue
If death is upon us
and fate has us bound
then time to cut bonds
and turn it around
This muse touched my heart
with keyboard of gold
so this tale doesn't end
rather waits to be told
Lifting myself up
with life on the mend
I owe it to you
my talented friend
Copyright ©
Jaycee
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2005-04-14 07:53:53]
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Re: Jumpin' the Bridge
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by blue_angel on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 11:20:32 AM AEST
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aww thats so sweet. you have such a way with words. you have no idea how much you have made my day. you.... your just amazing. thank you
luv n hugs always,
jennie* |
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Re: Jumpin' the Bridge
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by twisted_dreams on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 12:20:01 PM AEST
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| WOW.. that was really good... Keep up the good work!! |
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Re: Jumpin' the Bridge
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 05:21:23 PM AEST
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| ooo good. definitely. very moving, appreciative, and loyal. keep it up! |
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Re: Jumpin' the Bridge
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by EverlastingDawn on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:02:41 AM AEST
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Amazing poem
So beautiful in itself
Seeing past what we are surrounded by
Great Write
~Dawn |
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Re: Jumpin' the Bridge
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 07:32:32 PM AEST
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Ahhh I knew you'd have to come out of the slump sooner or later.... Thank God for your angel.....
Great write of appreciation.....
Jenni |
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