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The touch of lust
Contributed by
mia
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Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:03:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The smell of roses
The smell of that love
Like the freshness of the morning glow
and the smooth touch of baby skin
The first move and the first kiss
I hold you to tight, way to tight to like but to love
Kiss me tonight
Feel the soft touch of red lips on my body
Tinkles are alive, when you touch me all round
Feel my body
Feel the lust
I would love you till i can't anymore!
Is that possible to unlove the lovable rose of you?
Remember i found you after a long time
Waiting and hoping
I found my lustful rose, you.
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mia
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2005-04-14 07:03:10]
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Re: The touch of lust
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by Naveen on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:15:54 AM AEST
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Its surely touches me , nicely free flowing words, emotions well portrayed through .
keep writing
naveen |
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Re: The touch of lust
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:48:37 AM AEST
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| I like the way you word as "The first move and the first kiss". This is my favorite thing in a new love...the fist time you kiss or look in their eyes it so powerful. thank you for writing about a lost dream....Steve |
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