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Love destroyed
Contributed by
sride686
on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 05:30:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My crooked life full of crooked sin
A lust of life that comes from within
Lust and need and hate and greed
These are all the things I see
A life of pain with my life to blame
So I walk through life with my eyes a flam
My eyes a flam with all my shame
In sham I live and in shame I cry
As my life unfolds before my eyes
I start to weep and start to cry
As the blood begins to flow from my eyes
Blood so clear but dark and gray
To think I’ve turned and walked away
It’s a love that I’ve lost
Once a love that I’d gained
It’s a love that I’ve trash and I’m to blame
Copyright ©
sride686
... [
2005-04-14 05:30:22]
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Re: Love destroyed
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by mylady on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:30:46 AM AEST
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It sad no one should feel shame, some time
we make mistake. The poem was sad and also
nice to read. good luck
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Re: Love destroyed
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 02:47:49 PM AEST
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A mistake is a lesson waiting 2 be learned
seems u have learned it, time 2 try again . . .
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Re: Love destroyed
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 03:48:46 PM AEST
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The last three lines just tore me apart. This
really hit me hard as I too have been hurt by
what I thought was love. Thanks for sharing
this I am glad that I read it.
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Re: Love destroyed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:59:32 PM AEST
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| very emotive. i liked this a lot. |
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Re: Love destroyed
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by GurlyTye on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 02:30:47 PM AEST
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| This poem is soo deep.. i appreciate your comments to me.. and i will continue to read you very powerful work.. good wite |
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