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The Best Of Friends
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 01:29:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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What has happened… my dear friends?
What has went wrong?
When did your two hearts stop getting along?
Are you casting shadows across the fields of your lives…
Waiting for the flowers of your friendship to die?
I have never had this fear before…
Because… there has never been a rift.
There has never been a rip or tear.
Between your two hearts…
‘Cause you have always been together…
Never apart.
Has feelings gotten trampled upon…
And hurt?
Has any words of anger been exchanged…
Or words that burnt?
Why have you suddenly grown apart?
What has occurred to break apart these two hearts?
Has the days of the summer of your friendship now passed?
Will your friendship be mended and last?
The answers I seek…
But do not know…
For only… it is in your hearts to seek and to know…
And let not a beautiful friendship draw to a close.
Do not become complete strangers over some trifle dispute.
But rather look at what you have right in front of you.
Each other… and each other you need…
You do not find friends everyday that easily.
Why should I care?
Why should I waste priceless time
Worrying about a friendship that is not mine?
Because I love you both…
And it grieves my heart to see friends just give up!
You’ve always been…
The best of friends.
Sharing with each other…
Your deepest… darkest secrets
And all your hopes and dreams and wishes for things to be.
Now… I find… you’re talking like this is the end.
Oh… how it grieves my heart to see such a thing happen…
To the best of friends.
Please find a way…
To not let it end…
But to sort it all out and still be…
The best of friends.
My love for you both has no end…
It is a bottomless pit.
It just goes on and on… forever… my friends.
I’ll keep you both close to my heart
And pray you find a way to not break apart.
But always be…
The best of friends.
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Re: The Best Of Friends
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 06:45:03 AM AEST
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| Good poem with heartfelt emotion. I really enjoyed it. Shey |
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Re: The Best Of Friends
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 08:01:11 AM AEST
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Donna this is a touching poem full of emotion and sadness. A very well portrayed piece of poetry. May ur friends find their paths again. A great expressive write.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: The Best Of Friends
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by Archie on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 04:12:16 AM AEST
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| Great poem. I hope that things have worked out as well. |
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Re: The Best Of Friends
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 28th February 2019 @ 10:11:52 PM AEST
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You had me on the first two stanzas.
Great job here! |
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