|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
none
Contributed by
justpoetic
on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 12:44:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
I dry my eyes everynight before my else close tight, hoping that when I awake everything in my sight will be right. I can't live my days damn near drowning in my tears and being chased by my fears which have been chasing for a few years. I try to block out those memories that have me hiding my face behind this mask that I wish I could erase. Don't know what's wrong or right anymore, can't tell if it's dark or light anymore. Can't see anything since my tears have distorted my sight. Wishing for a sign from God to let me know to keep going and He will soon come to and release me from these worldly pressures, can't hold out to long, can't keep being fake with these friendly guestures. I just need a scapegoat to escape this goat that's been following me and that goat is these memories....
Copyright ©
justpoetic
... [
2005-04-14 00:44:09]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: none
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ppaul on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 06:47:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Did you type this all out in one go and post it unchanged?
title? how about: Night thoughts
because it read like someone just thinking
anyway i really like it, its the kind of poetry i've alway tried to write but for me it not easy i alway get caught up in trying to make it rhyme and wondering if what im saying makes sense |
|
|
Re: none
(User Rating: 1 )
by bigtig6269 on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 04:23:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| you could possibly title it tears or memories. word of advice, use some line breaks in there somewhere man. Like that, it all just looks jumbled together. a good poem, just difficult read |
|
|
Re: none
(User Rating: 1 )
by Nonefound on
Wednesday, 4th May 2011 @ 05:56:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Maybe if you haven't thought of any thing yet, you could call it MASK. or something with that in it. I liked it hopes things are great for you now. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
