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After the Party
Contributed by
gurlthatwontgiveup
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Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 12:41:17 AM in AEST
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The party is over
The people are gone
Its only you now
How did it go so wrong?
Did you have a good time?
Did you get your kicks?
Did you drink your wine?
Or did you get sick?
Those guys you met
They seemed pretty cool
And they knew they could bet
That you'd be a fool
Can you even recall?
Or did you black out?
What happened down the hall?
Why didn't you shout?
You're lucky she interrupted
Their dirty little scheme
You would've been corrupted
In ways you couldm't dream
Do you feel dirty?
Do you feel like a skank?
Did you have to be so flirty?
Do you know how much you drank?
I hope it was worth it
For one night of fun
Because now you sit
Feeling dumb
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Re: After the Party
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by The_Callif on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 12:47:41 AM AEST
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| good poem, i like how you rhymed everything so well |
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Re: After the Party
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by static_fury on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 12:54:59 AM AEST
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| lol....i can totaly relate.....i l;ike the introspective thought that you give...i liked it it made me think about my times....have you ever thought about trying a none ryming form and more of a sylable form? |
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Re: After the Party
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by Kay-Kay on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 03:07:54 PM AEST
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good poem i write some poetry like this having to do with partyies and bad happenings at parties, well great job and keep it up
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