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Scared no more
Contributed by
Merd
on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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You were waiting there for me
I had written you a note afraid to give
Standing there smiling, your box in hand
You made me forget woes and want to live.
You gave me a gift in your metal box
Told me to take care of it for two whole weeks
I put my stuff on the bus and finally gave you the note
Finally everything was told and i didn't feel so meek.
I found out you liked me as I liked you
We decided to go out and give that a try
I gave you a hug and boarded the bus
Thinking of two weeks apart almost made me cry.
I smiled the whole way home on the bus
I was the happiest I've ever known
Things that happen to each of us
Should always be shared and shown.
Copyright ©
Merd
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2002-12-22 22:20:00]
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Re: Scared no more
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 10:29:05 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem, and really sweet. Makes me think of : AWWWW. lol.
thanks
Mit liebe und umarmungen
Ali |
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Re: Scared no more
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 12:00:23 AM AEST
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| I liked this alot this was a great moment & it showed in your writing! Christina |
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Re: Scared no more
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by venkat on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 02:23:27 AM AEST
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Its a good poem. warm and tender feelings.
very nice. |
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Re: Scared no more
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by OreO on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 04:39:54 PM AEST
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Awww this was so sweet i enjoyed this one alot, im glad to see things worked out for you Merd.....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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