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Broken Down Boy
Contributed by
TheForgottenMelody
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Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 11:30:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Right now, I'm feeling broken down
You're something my brain can't wrap around
I know I bother you too much
And I know some things I shouldn't rush
Though my head's confused, my heart's still shining through
But can I say the same for you?
When I think thoughts I shouldn't think
My happiness begins to sink
Oh why can't I just make you see?
You mean so very much to me
The day I come up with the perfect words to say
Will you glance then turn away?
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TheForgottenMelody
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2005-04-13 23:30:23]
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Re: Broken Down Boy
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by bigtig6269 on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 11:38:12 PM AEST
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| good poem. I know the feeling |
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Re: Broken Down Boy
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 07:46:21 PM AEST
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i can relate so well to this
i hate that feeling
your poem was perfect in its expression
good work
-->Rae |
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Re: Broken Down Boy
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:57:47 PM AEST
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Hope you get your love soon.
Very good
God Bless |
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