|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
love is the sweetest drug
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 07:54:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
out of the darkness
and into the sun
let the cold wind come
and take my soul away
here inlies the seduction
like a blightful infection
love is the sweetest death
so simple, so subtle, it steals my breath
it feels so good to me
as long as i ride the high
a smile is all it takes
and i swear i can reach the sky
your beauty is a drug to me
an addiction i cant live without
your all thats on my mind lately
all things else i no longer care about
im addicted to you
please let me know if all i feel is true
or is this just like any other drug
with the more i use the more i fade away
why do i feel the way i do?
why do i sigh when i see you?
i am confused, blame it on my heart
conflicting emotions tearing me apart
Copyright ©
socialmisfit
... [
2005-04-13 19:54:11] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: love is the sweetest drug
(User Rating: 1 ) by BackToYou on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:13:45 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow, i love this poem. its so honest, with no cover ups or cliches. its very beautiful |
|
|
Re: love is the sweetest drug
(User Rating: 1 ) by MajesticPoet on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 09:14:42 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Go for it. The one thing that sucks is having that "If I would have just" Or "I should have just" thoughts in your mind. If you talk to her they way you write about her, she will see your true feelings. I know you dont want to be rejected or let down. I can fully understand that. It took me 6 months to tell the love of my life how I felt about her, and it was killing me. Control life, and make it work for you. Good luck and keep us posted.. |
|
|
Re: love is the sweetest drug
(User Rating: 1 ) by greeneyes on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 10:15:56 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Do what your heart feels, the mistake we all make is not telling someone how you really feel. They aren't mind readers. Beautifully written.
Nancy |
|
|
Re: love is the sweetest drug
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 12:51:03 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This poem is intense ! Great write i felt you .
Leia |
|
|
Re: love is the sweetest drug
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deleterious_Dislike on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 04:04:41 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This was very nice, very sweet.
The truth calls out. |
|
|
|