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Secretly loving him
Contributed by
SelfDistruction
on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 05:33:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I secretly love him
He must never know
He's one of my good friends
That's why I can't let my love show
I dream about him every night
and think about him every day
When he kisses her
I pretend that he's kissing me
I want him so bad
but he must never know
I want to tell him how I feel
To pour my heart and soul out
but I know I can't, I can't ever
It'll ruin our friendship, oh yes I know
So each day I go on and act like nothing's wrong
I'll live this lie
Act like I'm alright
Never letting my secret love ever show
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SelfDistruction
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2005-04-13 17:33:27]
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Re: Secretly loving him
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by lost13 on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 07:12:51 PM AEST
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hey i thought it was a good poem.
i know exactly what you mean.
i was going through the same thing.
also don't ever think your poetry is bad.
there's no such thing.
keep up the good work.
~*lost*~ |
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Re: Secretly loving him
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 02:27:22 AM AEST
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Hey...
I know the feeling... it's hard to love someone and them not even know and be friends too! I know your pain well.
This is a great little poem... you did very well in the wriing of this. Don't sell yourself short. Even what i think is my worse poem... may turn out as the most read of all.
Hope everything works out.
Love... hugs...
~Donna~ |
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