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The knife goes deeper
Contributed by
SelfDistruction
on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 05:25:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It hurts like hell
but I don't care
I love the pain
It feels so strange
I cut my wrist to watch it bleed
The blood so red
I just want more
Deeper and deeper the knife goes
As more blood comes
All my problems go
Always trying to die
But never actually dying
I want this pain and suffering of my life to end
To just let go of it all and be free to roam
in the underworld where it's very hot
and everybody stays there to rot
I know i'm going there soon
Just dig the knife in a little deeper
and i'll be there
So deeper it goes and more blood I spill
Until the day I can give this all up
and be free in hell
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SelfDistruction
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2005-04-13 17:25:27]
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Re: The knife goes deeper
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by lost13 on
Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 07:47:56 PM AEST
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this was a sad poem but it was really good. it
was something to think about and i know some ppl who do this kinda stuff. i liked it.
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Re: The knife goes deeper
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 02:20:51 AM AEST
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Thia is a very sad poem... but my one question would be: Is hell where you really want to go? It sure wouldn't be my first choice. Think about it okay?
A good poem... well written.
Love... hugs...
~Donna~ |
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