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Rage
Contributed by
Icequeen
on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She lies dormant:
Or seeming so.
Deep beneath the calm
Façade, down below
Hidden deep, boils rage
Black and violent.
Viscous, it sticks to and
Taints everything.
It waits for a chance to
Erupt to her surface.
For her breaking point
To set it free.
It rules her life,
Her slightest slip could
Let it loose.
Among those innocent
It would wreak havoc.
Hatred, real and putrid
Would destroy all
She holds dear.
So she holds on to
It, with an iron grip,
That is slipping.
©2002 Amy Pluess
Copyright ©
Icequeen
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2002-12-22 20:40:00]
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Re: Rage
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 08:25:54 PM AEST
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I cant believe no one has commented on this. It's so full of anger and emotion. I loved it!
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Re: Rage
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by Ash on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 01:15:31 PM AEST
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| I love it! UI can empathise with it so much, it's simply boiling over with emotions! Great work :) |
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Re: Rage
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by Ash on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 01:15:38 PM AEST
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| I love it! I can empathise with it so much, it's simply boiling over with emotions! Great work :) |
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